The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry .

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the steps of brick production for construction carried out in the factory.
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, it is undeniable from the diagram that the entire
process
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involves 7 steps with 3 main stages, starting with digging, processing, and ending with delivery. In the first stage, clay is dug up by a digger and
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taken to the factory.
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,
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clay is
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filtered and processed in a roller mill and
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mixed with sand and water.
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,
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complete mixture is either kept in a mould or cut in a wire cutter to make the raw shape of the bricks. In the next step, the shaped raw bricks are dried for 24 to 48 hours in a drying oven. After that, the dried raw bricks are kept in a kiln, both at moderate and high temperatures, up to 1300 degrees Celsius, and
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placed in a cooling chamber for about 48 to 72 hours.
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, the delivery
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is the final
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of brick manufacturing, and as it is noted, brick-making is a moderately complex
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that requires some predefined work to make it usable.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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