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how plastic bottles are recycled and turned into clothes?

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The given pictures illustrate how plastic
bottles
 are recycled and turned into clothes.
Overall
, there are 13 stages in the
process
, beginning with the transportation of plastic
bottles
 and culminating in the production of clothes. In the first step of
this
process
, plastic
bottles
 are loaded onto trucks, and they are
then
 delivered to the factories.
Then
, bad and good
bottles
 are sorted in the next stage. After they are cut in the special cutting machine, bottle pieces are washed and dried in the sun for 10 hours. In the subsequent step, dried bottle pieces boil.
Then
, they are placed into special containers for the straining
process
. After the straining
process
 is finished, pieces are turned into yarn. The following stage is
that
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when
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the ready yarn is sent to the weaving machine where threads are woven. After that, threads pass through rollers for the rolling
process
.
Finally
, recycled clothes are ready for sale.
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