In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In contemporary society, the technology plays an important role. In the future,
vehicle
will be converted Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
as
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into
self driven
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self-driven
vehicles
. Therefore
, they will become a driverless
transportation method. I believe that this
development provides considerable benefit to the community. This
essay would
discuss what are the strengths and Wrong verb form
will
weeknesses
of Correct your spelling
weaknesses
self driven
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self-driven
vehicles
and why advantages
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the advantages
overweigh
the disadvantages.
On the one hand, Verb problem
outweigh
self operating
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self-operating
vehicle
become popular all over the world. Especially, developed countries are now running their pilot projects with Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
driverless
vehicles
to evaluate the
efficiency and safety. Change the word
their
For instance
, in the USA, Testa company produced the world
first Change noun form
world's
self
car driven. According to
their website
the said Add a comma
website,
vehicle
improved the
road safety significantly Correct article usage
apply
due to
development of the AI technology. Further
, they have provided the
statistical evidence Correct article usage
apply
compairing
with Correct your spelling
comparing
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the human
a human
human driven
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human-driven
vehicle
. Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
Moreover
, enhancing the
road safety is the major reason Correct article usage
apply
to reduce
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for reducing
the
road accidents and deaths.
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apply
On the other hand
, there are enormous people involving
with driving jobs as their part-time or full-time occupation. Those Wrong verb form
involved
driverless
vehicles
obviously leads
to Change the verb form
lead
decrease
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a decrease
the
number of occupations Change preposition
in the
while
making drastic
escalation of unemployment. Correct article usage
a drastic
For example
, Australia has introduced a taxi service with self operating
cars. Add a hyphen
self-operating
Therefore
, now
onwards it has become a Change preposition
from now
treat
to reduce demand for drivers in Correct your spelling
threat
job
market. Add an article
the job
Hence
, in the future people may suffer to find out
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apply
a
part-time employment.
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apply
To conclude
, becoming
transportation is Verb problem
apply
driverless
, It will be consisted
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consist
have consisted
with
benefits and drawbacks. In my purview, there are numerous advantages Change preposition
of
could
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that could
be
overcome the disadvantages. Unnecessary verb
apply
Hence
, people will be replaced all existing vehicles
with self driven
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self-driven
modles
.Correct your spelling
models
modules
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