The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart indicates the number of donations from five non-profit organizations to developing countries from 2008 until 2011.
Overall
, it can be seen that the amount of resources that these organizations provide differs in terms of the quantity of the funds and the patterns from year
to year
period.
Firstly
, organization
2 submitted the biggest share of money to third-world countries, from above one billion
dollars
in 2008 to more than 2,5 billion
dollars
in a four-year
span. In contrast
to other committees, only Organization
2 committed to raising their contributed funds.
Secondly
, Organization
3 ranks second by around 1,5 billion
dollars
per year
offered to the nations, followed by Organization
1 approximately 2 billion
dollars
in total. These two organizations have similar patterns of a stagnated graph of donated funds, while
the other agencies have lowered their contributions to low-income countries by as low as 500 million dollars
in the last
year
of the chart.Submitted by maukaburtubel on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, organization, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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