Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important.

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human community believes that it is unacceptable to keep spices in

zoos

,and other

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of

community

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suppose that

zoos

are vital for financial development and human entertainment .

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the development of breeding programs contributes to the preservation of endangered species,I believe that the poor conditions that many

animals

held in

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captivity

are kept in make the

extinction

of

zoos

unacceptable.Here,

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essay will discuss about contribution of

zoos

for wild

animals

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conservation,and the unethical sides of

animals

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capturvity

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captivity

. On the one hand,

animals

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capturvities

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captivity

are

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significant for animal conservation because some

of

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animals

are going to

extinction

due to

human activities

such

as deforestation and hunting.

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,

zoos

are crucial to secure their lives as safe

shelter

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against the

extinction

of endangered species.

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,white and black

rhino

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are

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one of the most threatened animal groups

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the planet,and the numerous

zoos

around the world contribute to

save

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those significant animal

community

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by creating safe homes against

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poachers.

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,there is a huge dissatisfaction of some citizens about the way of treatments and caring methods of some

capturvity

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captivity

centres.

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, keeping

animals

in cramped

eequarters

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quarters

cages is unethical manner against

the

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human standards which is a violation of

animals

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rights that inversely

effects

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on

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their breeding patterns and health conditions.

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,there were numerous reports and social

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which

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the death of

animals

in

zoos

around the world

due to

careless treatment of the zoo authorities and Keepers. In conclusion,

Zoos

have maintained undeniable roles

for

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ensuring the lives of threatened

animals

that are in

red

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data list,

although

the unsuitable living conditions and caring methods

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in some breeding centres,

that

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could not

in

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the acceptable standards.

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that animals

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animals

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breeding programs and

zoos

are vital for any animal is

in

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a risk of

extinction

.