Nowadays many students have the oppurtunity to study for part or all of their course in foreign countries.While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also brings a number of disadvantages.

In the age of globalization,every part of our society
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some form of influence from
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culture. Education has
also
been more globalized now than it was back
then
. It is now possible to go abroad for
further
education.
Although
this
has some
disadvantages
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advantages
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. Certainly,
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studying abroad. It is costly in
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run to go for
further
studies as
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. They have to pay a lot of
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tuition
fees in foreign currency and that fee is generally
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higher
than the fee they
otherwise
would have spent in their home
country
. Indeed, students would have to leave
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country
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amount of years which will cause their home
country
to
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talented educated youth of
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to foreign countries as there is
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higher
probability that not everyone will return after they complete their course abroad.
This
will cause brain drain in the long run. Despite
this
, there is no avoiding that going
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abroad to study is an attractive
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.
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would get to enjoy
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quality of education than they would have
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to experience in their own
country
. Foreign
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countries
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might offer
wide
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range of
field
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of
studies
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and research
oppurtunities
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opportunities
.
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oppurtunity
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opportunity
to learn about foreign
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, arts and people. Clearly,
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the advantage
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of studying abroad
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the
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as they will
also
get to meet people from various nationalities and increase their social network. In conclusion, even though there is clearly some
disadvantages
in students leaving to foreign
country
to study, one cannot argue about
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of advantage foreign study can offer to them. In light of
this
, I think that studying abroad
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many
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.
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  • Opportunity
  • Invaluable experience
  • Cultural immersion
  • Language proficiency
  • International network
  • Adaptability
  • Financial burden
  • Home-sickness
  • Loneliness
  • Cultural shock
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