The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of recycling plastic bottles

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of recycling plastic bottles
The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of recycling plastic
bottles
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there are twelve phases, beginning with collecting
bottles
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from
environment
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the environment
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and ending up with converting
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them to
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to
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into
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clothes. Looking at the diagram in detail,
this
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harmful waste is gathered and transported to the factories where is sorted
as
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according to
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its certain quality.
Then
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, it is cut by
special
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a special
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mechanism. After being washed, the plastic
bottles
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are dried for 10 hours under the sun.
Following
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this
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, the product is boiled
in
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at
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the
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apply
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high temperatures
for relieving
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to relieve
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from
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apply
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toxic chemicals.
Next,
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boiled
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the boiled
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mixture is strained in the filtering machine. When the yarn is obtained from the ready product, it is used in the weaving process. After that, a piece of textile is rolled by workers to utilize in preparing clothes. The final stage is that the dresses which
is
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are
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changed from thrown
bottles
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are done for people’s 
advantanges
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advantage
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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