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The diagram shows the life cycle of a frog. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram shows the life cycle of a frog. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The
process
 diagram illustrates the mating
process
 of
adult
frog
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frogs
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.
Overall
, there are multiple steps that are followed to make
adult
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an adult
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frog
 which start from
mating
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the mating
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 stage to the end
at
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apply
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adult
one
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apply
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. The first step of
frog
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the frog
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 life cycle starts with mating with their partner to make eggs. And,
then
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the
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 biological
process
 occurs and
create
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creates
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embryo
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an embryo
the embryo
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. After that, It
covert
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converts
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 into tadpoles and
then
, they are
sticked
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stuck
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 to water plants. The whole
process
 happens
in
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at
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 the
below water
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below-water
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 level. At that time, the development starts and changes
it
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apply
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into gills and
talls
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tails
calls
talks
 which will lead to the formation of
frog
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a frog
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 shape. After development
completes
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is completed
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, the appearance of hindlegs
are started
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start
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 to appear and will take it to the water level.There, the appearance of frontlegs
are
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is
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also
 started to pulmonary breathing and
therefore
, the movement
start
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starts
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 to work and put it to the ground level where tails are started to shorten and convert it into a young
frog
 and
then
 into
adult
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an adult
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 one. After onwards, the same cycle repeats again and again.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, adult, frog with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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