Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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has a high impact on youths' future. specialists are trying to find the optimum time of learning but there is a disagreement between them. Some of them believe that kids should start
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at elementary school but others think it should be started at high school. I believe that the first opinion is more beneficial for juniors since they get the contents faster and more durable
in addition
to benefits in strengthening the brain capability. Of course, it may
also
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important problems which are mental energy consumption and social
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in some cases, but I think these are manageable. On the positive side, learning
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earlier levels would be quick and long-lasting. they have a fresh and fully potential mind than their secondary peers. And in terms of neurology, Broca's area of the brain loses its ability with age. It’s a necessary part
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our body that
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to learning. From another aspect, research has shown that we can maintain Broca's functionality by training
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early
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, so, if we start the mentioned lesson, our learning will have a better quality and we will preserve the potential of our brain for the next
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. Like every phenomenon,
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has some complications. In
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situations.
First,
the pressure caused by hard courses in lower grades disturbs the learning process.
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can threaten the quality of individuals' second tongue if balance is not maintained in education.
Second,
when someone learns a new way of speech, a world of information opens up to him/her.
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and foreign friends, and
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if you don’t manage it, you will put him/her in danger of academic lack of success. In
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influencing factors of studying
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as well as
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cases of its adverse effects and
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we can find
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way proper for
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.
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positive points, has not unsolvable problem. all issues can be solved by a balanced teaching plan and a managed content space.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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