Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Learning other
tongue
has a high impact on youths' future. specialists are trying to find the optimum time of learning but there is a disagreement between them. Some of them believe that kids should start Fix the agreement mistake
tongues
train
at elementary school but others think it should be started at high school. I believe that the first opinion is more beneficial for juniors since they get the contents faster and more durable Change the form of the verb
training
in addition
to benefits in strengthening the brain capability. Of course, it may also
cause two
important problems which are mental energy consumption and social harms
in some cases, but I think these are manageable.
On the positive side, learning Fix the agreement mistake
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earlier levels would be quick and long-lasting. they have a fresh and fully potential mind than their secondary peers. And in terms of neurology, Broca's area of the brain loses its ability with age. It’s a necessary part Change preposition
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to learning. From another aspect, research has shown that we can maintain Broca's functionality by training Add a missing verb
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, so, if we start the mentioned lesson, our learning will have a better quality and we will preserve the potential of our brain for the next Fix the agreement mistake
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degrees
.
Like every phenomenon, Fix the agreement mistake
degree
this
kind of policy for setting educational syllabus
has some complications. In Fix the agreement mistake
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this
case, we can face with
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two
complicate
situations. Replace the word
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First,
the pressure caused by hard courses in lower grades disturbs the learning process. this
can threaten the quality of individuals' second tongue if balance is not maintained in education. Second,
when someone learns a new way of speech, a world of information opens up to him/her. This
information can be accessed through multimedia contents
and foreign friends, and Fix the agreement mistake
content
as a
consequence
if you don’t manage it, you will put him/her in danger of academic lack of success.
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assay, we examined two
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as well as
two
cases of its adverse effects and as a
result
we can find Add a comma
result,
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way proper for schoolchild’s
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schoolchildren
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to all mentioned
positive points, has not unsolvable problem. all issues can be solved by a balanced teaching plan and a managed content space.Correct article usage
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