This is a part of a letter you receive from an English penfriend. In your next letter tell me about your favorite meal. What ingredients is it made of? How often do you eat it?

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Dear Cheny, I am writing to share my thoughts on my favourite meal, what ingredients is it made of and how often I eat it. Among my favourites,

not to mention

fried

chicken

Firstly

, fried

chicken

is almost impossible to become familiar with in a busy life.

For example

, it is often the main dish at fast food restaurants and is

also

something that not only adults but

also

children love. The

chicken

pieces will be coated with a layer of flour, and

then

fried.

Secondly

, when you eat, you will see the crispness of the fried dough and the tenderness of the

chicken

. The delicious taste with a little French fries or salad will give you a great meal.

Finally

, I really love

this

dish. Before, I used to eat fried

chicken

every weekend, even though eating too much is not good for my health. Lately, I have been eating less fried

chicken

, I only eat it 1-2 times a month. Thank you for taking the time to consider my thoughts Yours faithfully,

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coherence cohesion

Ensure a clear and logical structure throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

Use a more formal and suitable tone in your opening and closing.

task achievement

Expand on the details about the meal and its ingredients.

task achievement

Provide more specific information about the frequency of eating the meal.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

174 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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