You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. – statement/situation. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: •introduce yourself, •say why you are interested in this sports club •ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in order to ask for information about your sports club. I have been studying IT at INHA college for 6 months.
This
college does not include any
sport
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sports
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facilities.
However
,
this
issue will not stop me from doing sports,
due to
the fact that sport is part of my life.
Also
, I needed a gym
that is
located near my house,
that is
why I
choose
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chose
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your fitness centre. I have read your advertisement
of
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for
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the sports
center
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centre
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and would like to get more information.
Firstly
, I would like to know about membership.
Secondly
, I would be grateful
whether
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if
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you could tell me what the price is.
Finally
, I would like to know more about
facilities
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the facilities
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. I would appreciate If you could inform me as soon as possible. You can contact me on my phone number which is: 99 999 99 99 I look forward to receiving a prompt reply! Yours faithfully, Askarova Mohinur
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suitable writing tone
Consider using a slightly more formal tone throughout the letter to maintain professionalism.
single idea per paragraph
Avoid combining too many ideas into a single paragraph to ensure clarity.
complete response
You provided a complete response that addressed all parts of the prompt, including introducing yourself, explaining your interest, and asking specific questions.
logical structure
The letter follows a logical structure with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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