You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. – statement/situation. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: •introduce yourself, •say why you are interested in this sports club •ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in order to ask for information about your sports club.
I have been studying IT at INHA college for 6 months.
This
college does not include any Linking Words
sport
facilities. Change the noun form
sports
However
, Linking Words
this
issue will not stop me from doing sports,Linking Words
due to
the fact that sport is part of my life.
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Also
, I needed a gym Linking Words
that is
located near my house, Linking Words
that is
why I Linking Words
choose
your fitness centre.
I have read your advertisement Wrong verb form
chose
of
the sports Change preposition
for
center
and would like to get more information. Change the spelling
centre
Firstly
, I would like to know about membership. Linking Words
Secondly
, I would be grateful Linking Words
whether
you could tell me what the price is. Correct word choice
if
Finally
, I would like to know more about Linking Words
facilities
.
I would appreciate If you could inform me as soon as possible. You can contact me on my phone number which is: 99 999 99 99
I look forward to receiving a prompt reply!
Yours faithfully,
Askarova MohinurCorrect article usage
the facilities
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suitable writing tone
Consider using a slightly more formal tone throughout the letter to maintain professionalism.
single idea per paragraph
Avoid combining too many ideas into a single paragraph to ensure clarity.
complete response
You provided a complete response that addressed all parts of the prompt, including introducing yourself, explaining your interest, and asking specific questions.
logical structure
The letter follows a logical structure with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.