The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The charts illustrate the
proportion
of people
of different ages in 2000 in two countries: Yemen
and Italy and also
forecast the data for the year
2050.While
Yemen
will see the domination of 0-14
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14-year-olds
year
olds in their population
overtaken by 15-59
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59-year-olds
year
olds in 2050, the dominant population
in Italy, 15-59 years olds
, remains the same over the period, albeit at a far lower percentage by 2050.
As is presented in the charts, the Correct your spelling
59-year-olds
children
were more than half of the total population
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of Yemen
in 2000. Aged people
in this
year
were less than 4% of the total population
in Yemen
. Finally
, people
from 15 to 59 years old were the remaining 46% of the total population
. In summary, Yemen
had more children
and very few old people
in the year
2000. Now the projection shows that in 2050, the proportion
of children
in Yemen
will decrease to 37% while
the number of old people
will increase. People
from the 15 to 59 age group would be the dominating proportion
making up above 57% of the total people
of the country.
Meanwhile, In Italy, adults accounted for the highest 61.6% of the total citizens in 2000, followed by the elderly people
percentage which came in second place, 24.1% and toddlers and children
counted only 14.3%. In 2050, it is forecasted that the adult population
will still be the highest proportion
, 46.2% and the number of seniors will be about 42.3%, almost twice higher than in 2000. On the other hand
, the percentage of children
will decline to only 11.5%.Submitted by nhatquanganh2 on
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