The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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The charts illustrate the
proportion
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of
people
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of different ages in 2000 in two countries:
Yemen
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and Italy and
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forecast the data for the
year
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2050.
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Yemen
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will see the domination of 0-
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14-year-olds
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year
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olds in their
population
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overtaken by 15-
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59-year-olds
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year
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olds in 2050, the dominant
population
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in Italy, 15-
59 years olds
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59-year-olds
, remains the same over the period, albeit at a far lower percentage by 2050. As is presented in the charts, the
children
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were more than half of the total
population
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Yemen
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in 2000. Aged
people
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in
this
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year
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were less than 4% of the total
population
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in
Yemen
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.
Finally
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,
people
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from 15 to 59 years old were the remaining 46% of the total
population
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. In summary,
Yemen
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had more
children
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and very few old
people
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in the
year
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2000. Now the projection shows that in 2050, the
proportion
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of
children
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in
Yemen
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will decrease to 37%
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the number of old
people
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will increase.
People
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from the 15 to 59 age group would be the dominating
proportion
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making up above 57% of the total
people
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of the country. Meanwhile, In Italy, adults accounted for the highest 61.6% of the total citizens in 2000, followed by the elderly
people
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percentage which came in second place, 24.1% and toddlers and
children
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counted only 14.3%. In 2050, it is forecasted that the adult
population
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will still be the highest
proportion
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, 46.2% and the number of seniors will be about 42.3%, almost twice higher than in 2000.
On the other hand
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, the percentage of
children
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will decline to only 11.5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, people, yemen, year, population, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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