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TOPIC: DO YOU THINK EXAMS ARE A GOOD WAY TO TEST STUDENTS?

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Nowadays, testing is an effective method of evaluating
students
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 others believe it will put a lot of pressure on the pupils. Everything has side effects, and
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 essay will discuss both of these points of view and argue in
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 of the latter. On the one hand, the process of gaining knowledge is arduous. After that, we need a tool to prove that the learner understands or checks the
abilities
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 to apply these to their jobs.
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, examinations are meant to create a sense of responsibility among those learners to remember concepts and present them in the most valuable form. It is crucial in enhancing the child's
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 personality, memory, and revision skills. One example that comes to mind is a university requiring admissions tests to help them distinguish the top applicants, particularly for competitive courses
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 as law, mathematics, medicine, etc.
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, international
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 must have an international English certificate before entering school.
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,
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 have been associated with stress and competition. Many
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 dread the daily trip to school because of it. The pupils should be joyful about learning to be present in the classroom. Society needs to place less emphasis on the importance of academic qualifications and a person's learning
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. Most of them forget all the knowledge they have learned after the
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 and only follow up if future
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 require it.
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, the Dutch education system only gives a little homework, especially not in the early years. In conclusion, having looked at
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 topic in detail,
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 it is true that
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 can enhance
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' critical thinking
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, educational institutions should decrease the frequency of assessments. The main reason is that it helps learners relieve their stress and learning experience.

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introduction conclusion present
You should ensure that the introduction clearly presents the topic and your viewpoint, while the conclusion should effectively summarize the main points and restate your position. Introductions and conclusions are crucial for framing your discussion and signposting your argument to the reader.
logical structure
Your essay requires a clearer logical structure with better-organized paragraphs and explicit linking words that help to guide the reader through your argument. Furthermore, avoid abrupt transitions between ideas, ensuring each paragraph naturally flows to the next.
supported main points
Make sure that each of your main points is well-developed with specific examples or evidence. While you did provide some examples, deeper elaboration would strengthen your argument and give it more weight.
complete response
It is important to offer a complete answer to the question posed, making sure to address all parts of the task prompt. Make sure that your essay fully explores the implications, consequences, and varied perspectives on the issue at hand.
clear comprehensive ideas
Strive to present your ideas with greater clarity and a more comprehensive argument structure. Use topic sentences to clearly state the main idea of each paragraph, and follow these with explanations or examples that underline your point.
relevant specific examples
Incorporating relevant and specific examples helps reinforce your argument. Ensure that the examples you choose directly support the points you are making and are detailed enough to add meaningful context to your discussion.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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