20.The graph below shows the percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

20.The graph below shows the percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph displays the proportion of
reclycled
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recycled
plastic, cans, paper and metal in the town in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010
Overall
, an increasing amount of all four products were recycled, all began with a similar percentage at the beginning,
while
metal grew the most compared with the others.
Metal
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The metal
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had a waste
recycle
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of around 12% in 2000,
this
peaked
to
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at
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30 in 2005, and it continued to rise by 10% in the
last
year, becoming the most recycled
products
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product
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. Cans started the period with approximately 12%,
this
dropped by 1% during the next 5 years,
after
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and after
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, it rocketed sharply to just under 35% in 2010. 10% of the plastic
were
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was
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recycled in 2000,
this
increased by around 1% in 2005, and it almost doubled in the
last
year, recycling
a
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25%.
Finally
, paper had 11% at the beginning of the period,
then
it climbed gradually to 19% in 2005 and surged to
little
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a little
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under 30% in 2010.
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