20.The graph below shows the percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph displays the proportion of
reclycled
plastic, cans, paper and metal in the town in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010
Correct your spelling
recycled
Overall
, an increasing amount of all four products were recycled, all began with a similar percentage at the beginning, while
metal grew the most compared with the others.
Metal
had a waste Add an article
The metal
recycle
of around 12% in 2000, Change the form of the verb
recycling
this
peaked to
30 in 2005, and it continued to rise by 10% in the Change preposition
at
last
year, becoming the most recycled products
. Cans started the period with approximately 12%, Fix the agreement mistake
product
this
dropped by 1% during the next 5 years, after
, it rocketed sharply to just under 35% in 2010.
10% of the plastic Correct word choice
and after
were
recycled in 2000, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
this
increased by around 1% in 2005, and it almost doubled in the last
year, recycling a
25%. Correct article usage
apply
Finally
, paper had 11% at the beginning of the period, then
it climbed gradually to 19% in 2005 and surged to little
under 30% in 2010.Correct article usage
a little
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