in many countries traditional food is replaced by international fast food. this has navative effects on both families and societies. do you agree or disagree

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In
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day and age, it is prevalent that multinternational
food
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chain
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are replacing conventional gourmet. Granted, those companies bring about economic benefits to the countries, but
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poses
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pertinent
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impact on both households and societies. To commence with, the general health of families might decline. International fast
food
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are
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gernerally
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generally
high in sodium, oil and fat
in contrast
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to
tradtional
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traditional
or homemade
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cuisine
. To make the matter worse, fast
food
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not satiate one for a long period of time. It is commonplace that
peole
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people
get peckish again no long after consuming them.
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, people might overeat. That could give rise to obesity.
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, given that fast
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convenient, households may order
take away
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takeaway
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food
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in lieu of cooking to replace
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nutritious
when ever
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whenever
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feeling lazy. In
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addition
, there is a natural tendency in we,
human
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that
food
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high in energy is sought after.
Household
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, especially children might get addicted to junk
food
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when they have been consuming them for a period of time. As for the societies, the culture there may slowly be diminished, neglected and eventually even fade away. It can be attributed to the fact
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these conglomerates are able to afford rent, and
thus
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their branches and stores can be omnipresent. In consequence, small shops selling
tradtional
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traditional
goods might be rarer. Dwellers might
also
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opt for fast
food
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as their go-to option for how reachable they are. Since the
food
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of a country reflects a lot on the culture there as well the lifestyle of the locals,
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erosion in
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could escalate to a slump in the cultural influence amid the place. Despite the fact that some might argue the owners of small traditional can learn the successful examples of international companies so as to maintain their patrons and attract customers, it is
challengin
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challenging
if not impossible to do so. It can be ascribed to the international influence those corporates hold,
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their ability to cash in and launch costly marketing
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like
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endorsement
endorsements
from celebrities.
To sum up
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, the phenomenon of international fast
food
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taking the spot of a
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conventional
food
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poses
threat
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on
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both households
as well as
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societies in term
health
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of health
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and culture.
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