It is crucial for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Few people believe that

parks

are crucial

places

for relaxing ,

while

others argue that

gardens

and squares are making the land useless and should be used for more practical purposes. In my opinion,

parks

and squares are important for various reasons in cities and towns , despite the voices against

this

issue. On one hand, open

spaces

and

gardens

in

city

centres are

places

where people commence

for

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meetings and leisure activities.

In addition

to that , children and their parents visit

parks

to relax after a busy daily routine.

Moreover

, it is a place for recreation for the elderly. In fact, local

gardens

in

city

centres are considered to be the heart of

city

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. In fact , the creation of these

parks

are

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usually associated with

city's

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history .

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, tourists all around the world visit various European countries to visit their historical

parks

and

gardens

.

Thus

, it is imperative to preserve it for

the

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future

generation

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.

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However

,cities are facing

over crowded

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nowadays and there is not enough infrastructure to

accomodate

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accommodate

the population . Authorities need more open

spaces

in order to develop public and commercial

spaces

. New transportation schemes are constructed that

requires

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squares and

parks

to construct stations and wider lanes.

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,

the

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London

city

was developed 200 hundred years ago and roads were constructed to be narrow and small , designated for carts , not for cars and buses. So, London authorities decided to convert historical

gardens

and

spaces

into car

parks

and highways.

However

,

this

has been highly criticised by civilians and local

poeple

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people

. In conclusion , destroying historical

places

like

parks

and open

spaces

to create modern infrastructure is not the solution for urban

scity

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city

scarcity .

Therefore

, it is imperative for the public and authorities to preserve these

places

for the upcoming years.