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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer technology. It is used in business, crime detection and even to fly planes and drive cars. Will this dependence on technology a good thing or should we be suspicious of its benefits?

#computer #technology #business #crime #detection #planes #drive #cars #dependence
It is undeniably true that
people
 rely more on computer
technology
 to solve every task
such
 as shopping, expanding and promoting a business, tracking and detecting the location of
the
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 suspect or booking a ticket for
flight
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a flight
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. I believe
this
 is a positive development since it makes everything become more simple and effective. The main aim
people
 get when they use the
internet
 to cope with their job is because of the way it works, which is more efficient and fast especially for handling important business documents,
whereas
 they can send one document to several countries collectively.
For example
, sales managers from
five star
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 hotels, when they have a package to promote, will be easier nowadays using the advance of
internet
technology
 to promote their products and reach global markets since
people
 around the world are using the
internet
.
Furthermore
, not only business owners but ordinary
people
 who want to travel do not
also
 have to go to a travel agent,
instead
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 they can pay directly using their mobile phone.
Thus
, the
internet
 has brought a myriad of benefits whether for work or daily use. Another reason to consider is the way
which
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 helps police to detect the location of the suspect.
This
 is because they have
such
 state-of-the-art
technology
 that can find specific locations and using those tools is likely to get real evidence.
For Instance
, in using computer sketches, police tend to get an almost correct image of the burglars and
mostly
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 proven 100 % correct.
This
 is how
technology
 helps to make everything easier to deal with.
To conclude
, I would say that
development
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 of computer
technology
 has made
people
 become more accessible over everything not only
personal
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 but
also
 on a large scale
such
 as big companies.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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