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The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems? What measures can be used to solve these problems?

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people
 from the countryside to urban places for work brings out crucial issues in both areas.
This
 essay first discusses the unemployment problems of dwellers living in agricultural zones and
then
 suggests possible solutions to them.
To begin
 with, it's a well-known fact that the majority of developed
cities
, especially capital
cities
, are places where the main workplaces are gathered,
whereas
 there aren't any in the villages.
This
 is
due to
 the fact that a great many universities, far higher-level state bodies, and the most enormous companies are located in these
cities
.
Therefore
, the
youngs
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 from these regions are coming so as to get an education,
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 their own lives and careers here because of
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 more job opportunities.
As a result
,
this
 leads to
such
 problems as overcrowding, contamination, congestion in towns, and the desolation of villages.
According to
 the results of a study conducted
last
 year in Bulgaria, only 13
people
 live in Peshtera village, which had a population of more than 700 in the 1990s.
Secondly
, as an answer to
this
 problem, both states and entrepreneurs must take certain steps.
Following
this
, by moving some of the workplaces located in
cities
 to out-of-town areas, the government can reduce the load on
cities
as well as
 create new jobs for residents in the villages.
Along with
 the state authorities, the big companies, by launching start-ups, help to provide employment for
people
 from these regions and to improve there. To exemplify, Agali village in Zangilan, by applying the idea of
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 village, creates relevant conditions for many
people
. In conclusion, unemployment is one of the main causes of
people
 moving from agricultural places, and government and private sector representatives can work together to solve it.
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