the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee nd tea buying and drinking habits
The bar chart compares the percentage of Australians purchasing and drinking
coffee
and tea in five different cities during the period of 4 weeks.
We can see that a majority of individuals prefer to go to the cafes. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
instant
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coffee
has noticeably higher popularity than fresh Use synonyms
coffee
in five Australian regions.
Melbourne residents are the most interested people in going to café with a percentage of 64%. Use synonyms
Then
Hobart and Sydney have the second and the third most interested people in drinking Linking Words
coffee
at Use synonyms
coffee
shops with 63% and 61% respectively. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the highest amount of Linking Words
instant
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coffee
was purchased in Hobart with a percentage of 54% compared to Melbourne and Sydney at around 47%. Use synonyms
However
fresh Linking Words
coffee
appeals to fewer people in Hobart at 38% compared to Sydney and Melbourne with a proportion of approximately 43%.
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On the other hand
, the other two cities, Brisbane and Adelaide have almost the same number of fresh Linking Words
coffee
buyers just under 35%. Use synonyms
whereas
, these cities witnessed significantly higher figures for Linking Words
instant
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coffee
consumption with a rate of around 50%. Meanwhile, residents in Adelaide exceptionally found Use synonyms
instant
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coffee
more appealing than going to a Use synonyms
coffee
shop.Use synonyms
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