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The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The given bar chart delineates the information related to the
number
 of British people emigrating to five different destinations that are
Australia
,
Spain
, New
Zealand
,
USA
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the USA
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 and
France
between
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in
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 the period from 2004 to 2007. Looking from an
overall
 perspective, it is readily apparent that
Australia
 is the country that
recieves
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receives
 the highest
number
 of
indiviuals
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individuals
 from Britain in all years that are 2004, 2005, 2006 and 2007.
During
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In
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 2004, about 42
thousands
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thousand
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of
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apply
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British humans
got
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were
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setled
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settled
 in
Australia
, followed by
Spain
 which accounts for 35,000. In
same
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the same
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 era, New
Zealand
 and
USA
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the USA
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 had
same
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the same
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 count of emigrants,
whcih
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which
is
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was
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 25,000. During the same duration,
France
recceived
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received
 the least amount of
mankinds
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mankind
 from Britain.
While in
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In
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 2005, the count abated in
number
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a number
the number
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 of countries like
Australia
, New
Zealand
 and
USA
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the USA
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.
However
, during the same period,
Spain
 and
France
 received more emigrants as compared to 2004. In
France
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France,
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this
number
 got increased by 950 men and women. In 2006,
Australia
 acquired the highest
number
 of
english
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English
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indiviuals
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individuals
 among other countries, which is 52,000, followed by
Spain
,
France
,
USA
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the USA
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 and New
Zealand
. In 2007,
Australia
have
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had
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 43,000
of
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apply
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displaced people and
this
 count
was
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apply
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decreased to 22,000
for
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in
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 New
Zealand
.
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