The bar chart below shows the reduction in traffic accidents in Bridgewater following the introduction of extra lanes on busy roads. Try to make the introduction.
The graph illustrates how accidents were reduced in Bridgewater by adding extra lanes on busy roads/motorways. In every case, the additional lane proved to reduce the traffic accident.
Although
, the reduction proportion Correct word choice
However
were
slightly different Change the verb form
was
in
each of Change preposition
on
roads
.Correct article usage
the roads
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