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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
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The line graph compares the
number
 of tourists visiting C
island
 over a
period
 of 8 years.
It is clear that
 the total
number
 of
visitors
 has increased over the
period
.
Moreover
, the
number
 of enthusiastic individuals
in
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staying on the
island
,
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 generally exceeds those
of
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staying on cruise ships. In 2010,
.75million of
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a million
visitors
 preferred to stay on
island
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the island
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whereas
, only .5 individuals were willing to stay on
ship
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the ship
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. Between 2011 and 2013,
number
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 of
island
 residents increased significantly to 1.5 million
visitors
,
in contrast
number
 of ship passengers remained at a steady level of 0.5. over
this
period
. afterwards,
although
island
 inhabitants saw no change, ship
visitors
 increased and overtook
at
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middle
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the middle
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2015
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of 2015
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, And continued the upward trend until the year 2017.
On the other hand
, the total
number
 of
visitors
 saw
an
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 steady increase from
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1 million
1million
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1 million
 to 2.7 million
visitors
 during the
period
 of 2010 to 2015,
although
 it remained stable from 2015 to 2016, the
island
 witnessed a remarkable increase in
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total
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number
 of
visitors
 until 2017.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, period, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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