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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Reading
books
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 is always the best way to learn new things and improve one's knowledge.
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, many
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 today are opting to read
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books
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 rather than paper
books
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.
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 essay will illustrate the merits and demerits of
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 statement. On the one hand, reading
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books
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 helps
people
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 access all the information immediately without waiting for the hard copy to get the information they need. The digital copy of
books
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 uplifts readers' lives in a better way. As an example, it is cost-efficient and readily available. In recent years, the World Education Centre conducted a survey showing that 45% of book lovers have selected
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books
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 as the best way to access newly published
books
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.
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 has
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 attracted many captivators. Another reason is it is very convenient as it can be accessible through mobiles, laptops, and even big screens TV and projectors.
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,
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books
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 are more environmentally friendly,
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 is because the cutting down of trees has decreased in recent years as the
On the other hand
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,
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books
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 are making
people
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 too lazy to go out and stop them from visiting shops to explore more
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.
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,
e-
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books
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 are affecting many
people
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's eyesight and creating various health disorders.
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, digital
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 are used by many children in both school and at home to spend more time in front of screens, which increases eyesight power and causes headaches.
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this
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e-
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books
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also
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 dragged down the pupil's interest in writing
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 and publishing
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. In conclusion,
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 there are some minor disadvantages to e-reading, the advantages of
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 trend far overshadow them.
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books
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 offer convenience, accessibility, and affordability, making them an increasingly popular choice among readers.
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, they are environmentally friendly which is a big plus.

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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to maintain a consistent structure throughout the essay, ensuring that each point flows logically to the next.
Task Achievement
Some points were not fully developed, such as the environmental benefits of e-books; try to explore these ideas in more depth.
Coherence and Cohesion
Avoid fragmented sentences and ensure each sentence directly contributes to your main points.
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay provides a clear introduction and conclusion, effectively framing the discussion.
Task Achievement
Specific examples, like the survey by the World Education Centre, effectively support the argument about the benefits of e-books.
Task Achievement
The discussion includes relevant themes such as cost-efficiency and environmental impact, which are well-tailored to the topic.

Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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