The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations, during 2010-2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations, during 2010-2013. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
In the
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about
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the
proportio
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proportion
of Catholics residing in different nations,
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from
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2010 to 2013.
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population that have been
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during 2010
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china
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China
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and
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India
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india
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the number has
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approximately
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approximately

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