When new cities are planed it is important to build more public parks and sports facilities than shopping malls. Do you agree or disagree

Urban planning is the

process

of making decisions about cities and

its

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components and designing the outline of cities. During the

process

, it is essential to construct more public

spaces

like parks and gymnasiums, rather than shopping

centers

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. I strongly agree with

this

idea, because of two reasons.

First,

shopping

malls

are best built by

private

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sector

, and

second,

public amenities serve a greater number of

people

compared to shopping

centers

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. Economically concerned, shopping complexes are profit-making agencies,

hence

they shall be governed by

private

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sector

. A non-governmental entity, in order to gain higher revenue,

invest

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more and more

on

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making its mall better. Governments and

muncipalities

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municipalities

around the world are neither

repsonsible

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responsible

, nor financially obliged, to build

such

facilities.

People

or private organizations construct

malls

and shop-owners or brands gather to either buy a unit or rent one.

This

process

is not a governmental concern; except they shall maintain laws governing the aforementioned entities. In Tehran,

For instance

,

2010's

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was the decade that many

malls

emerged, and not a single one was built by the government.

On the other hand

, parks and

sport

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complexes are for

public

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good; a wider audience versus those who go to shopping

centers

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. If it was the case that the city planners had to decide to choose public

spaces

or shopping

malls

, the number of

people

who use these two options is the key.

In addition

, public

spaces

serve as a public good and

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beneficial for the mental and physical health of the citizens. Urban specialists have to dedicate certain

spaces

for

people

to gather,

workout

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, and enjoy a collective quality time. In fact, every thoughtful urban planning

process

is an example. Take Isfahan, a city located within the Iranian central

dessert

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. A single river has turned into a city with large organic green

spaces

. In conclusion, the role of urban designers is to make sure they build public parks and

sport

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facilities, and let the private

sector

take care of shopping

malls

. Simply,

public

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the public

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sector

is not responsible for shopping

centers

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,

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but rather is responsible for public health and well-being.