The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
The table below compares the Australian
women
aged 40-44 years
according to
the number of their children in four different years
.
Overall
, it is clear that
there had
been a gradual decline in the proportion of Wrong verb form
has
women
who had three
kids
or more, since 1981. Whereas
, the rate of Australian women
who had none, one or two kids
, increased during the mentioned period.
In 1981, the number of 40-44-year-old women
who had never experienced being a mother was 8.5%. while
, the proportion of having one or two kids
was 7.6% and 29%, respectively. In the following years
, these three
figures raised
slowly to reach their highest level Verb problem
rose
at the end
of the period. Moreover
, in 2006 the figure for having one child doubled, although
it was lower than two others at first.
The trends for the popularity of having three
, four and even more kids
, saw a slow decrease during four different years
(1981,1986,1996 and 2006). Meanwhile, the figure for having three
children which were
27.4% in 1981 experienced a small change in fall over the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
years
to reach 21.5%, while
the figure for 4 kids
or more that had a second rate of popularity at initiation, decreased remarkably to stand at lowest proportion among all figures in 2006 (11%).Submitted by kimiaakhyani67 on
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