The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
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The table below compares the Australian
women
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aged 40-44
years
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according to
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the number of their children in four different
years
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there
had
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been a gradual decline in the proportion of
women
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who had
three
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kids
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or more, since 1981.
Whereas
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, the rate of Australian
women
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who had none, one or two
kids
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, increased during the mentioned period. In 1981, the number of 40-44-year-old
women
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who had never experienced being a mother was 8.5%.
while
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, the proportion of having one or two
kids
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was 7.6% and 29%, respectively. In the following
years
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, these
three
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figures
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rose
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slowly to reach their highest level
at the end
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of the period.
Moreover
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, in 2006 the figure for having one child doubled,
although
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it was lower than two others at first. The trends for the popularity of having
three
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, four and even more
kids
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, saw a slow decrease during four different
years
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(1981,1986,1996 and 2006). Meanwhile, the figure for having
three
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children which
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27.4% in 1981 experienced a small change in fall over the
years
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to reach 21.5%,
while
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the figure for 4
kids
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or more that had a second rate of popularity at initiation, decreased remarkably to stand at lowest proportion among all figures in 2006 (11%).

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words women, years, three, kids with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fertility rate
  • demographic shift
  • age cohort
  • workforce implications
  • government policy
  • birth rate fluctuations
  • education level
  • career advancement
  • reproductive health
  • family planning
  • socio-economic factors
  • population pyramid
  • life expectancy
  • childbearing age
  • maternity leave
  • contraceptive methods
  • population growth rate
  • average family size
  • maternal health
  • census data
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