The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations, during 2010-2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given bar graph illustrates
the
how many Correct article usage
apply
Catholic
people
live in six countries (China, India, Philiphines
, Vietnam, Korea and Japan) from 2010 to 2013.
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Philippines
Overall
, according
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according to
this
chart most Cathalic
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Catholic
people
in Philippines
and the least Correct article usage
the Philippines
people
live in Japan.
In 2010 and 2013 the highest Correct quantifier usage
number of Chatholic
Chatholic
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Catholic
people
in Philippines
, Correct article usage
the Philippines
75,940,000
and 72,000,000 respectively, but the figures showed Add a missing verb
were 75,940,000
the
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a
decreased
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decrease
of
Catholics in 2013. India is Change preposition
in
next
highest country, in 2010 it was 10,570,000 and in 2013 Correct article usage
the next
number
of Catholics grew up to 19,000,000, in 2013, Add an article
the number
a number
number
of Change the article
the number
people
has
almost doubled.
In both years, Vietnam Catholics population Unnecessary verb
apply
closely
equal, in 2010, 5,590,000 and in 2013, 5,321,168, anyhow, Add a missing verb
was closely
Catholic
number of Correct article usage
the Catholic
people
dropped in Vietnam in 2013. Similarly
, Korea
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in Korea
also
Catholic
popultaion
reduced, in 2013 clearly Correct your spelling
population
we
can see Correct pronoun usage
apply
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a considerble
considerble
dropped it was 1,319,190 and in 2010 it was 5,270,000.
Japan had the least Correct your spelling
considerable
considerably
Catholic
population, which was
accounted Unnecessary verb
apply
at
400,000 in 2010 and in 2013, 509,000.Change preposition
for
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words catholic, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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