38.Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that when planning the construction of a building, the structure and functioning

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more important than the aspect.

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essay agrees with

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statement because safetiness of the building is

principal

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and they should serve

for

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their purpose. If individuals when deciding to create a building only think about the external aspect,

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can be dangerous.

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is because all

buildings

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should be constructed in a way

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safe and won’t cause any harm, so

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won’t happen. Some individuals just want a

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building, no matter how it is made, and they forget about the important elements of the building,

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can cause the destruction of it at any time.

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, all

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have a main part, which can be a column or a wall which supports all the

building

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and if

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is demolished,

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all the

building

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will be pulled down. The structure is designed to cater to

specific

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purpose. People want to construct a building because they need it for something specific.

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depending

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what is planned to be used for, the design of the building is different so it can ensure that it

fulfill

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all its actions, as each construction is not

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, tsunamis often occur in Japan, so their

buildings

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are built in a way that can resist these catastrophes so they can’t be knocked down when disasters happen. In conclusion,

buildings

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should be constructed in a way

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apply

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that is

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secure and

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the reason why they are created, and I

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, believe that

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a building’s

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function is more important.

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task achievement

Provide a stronger example to support your argument.

lexical resource

Expand your vocabulary. Use a wider range of words and phrases.

grammatical range accuracy

Pay attention to the accuracy of your sentence structures. There are some minor errors.

Your opinion

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If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

265 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

aesthetics
functionality
architectural integrity
practicality
usability
form versus function
cost efficiency
user-centric design
cultural value
emotional impact
architectural landmark
tourism appeal
practical design features
maintenance costs
safety considerations

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