38.Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that when planning the construction of a building, the structure and functioning

is

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more important than the aspect.

This

essay agrees with

this

statement because safetiness of the building is

principal

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and they should serve

for

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their purpose. If individuals when deciding to create a building only think about the external aspect,

this

can be dangerous.

This

is because all

buildings

should be constructed in a way

that is

safe and won’t cause any harm, so

accident

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accidents

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won’t happen. Some individuals just want a

good looking

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building, no matter how it is made, and they forget about the important elements of the building,

this

can cause the destruction of it at any time.

For instance

, all

buildings

have a main part, which can be a column or a wall which supports all the

building

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buildings

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and if

this

is demolished,

then

all the

building

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buildings

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will be pulled down. The structure is designed to cater to

specific

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a specific

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purpose. People want to construct a building because they need it for something specific.

Then

depending

for

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on

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what is planned to be used for, the design of the building is different so it can ensure that it

fulfill

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fulfills

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all its actions, as each construction is not

same

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the same

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.

For example

, tsunamis often occur in Japan, so their

buildings

are built in a way that can resist these catastrophes so they can’t be knocked down when disasters happen. In conclusion,

buildings

should be constructed in a way

so

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that is

secure and

satisfy

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satisfies

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the reason why they are created, and I

therefore

, believe that

building’s

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a building’s

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function is more important.