The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good thing?

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Celebrities are very popular these days, because of the status, they earned after coming from basic backgrounds. Some
people
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are so inspired from their lives, that they follow every step of their. It could be a good or bad thing, we will discuss
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further
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in the following paragraphs. To start with, platforms like social media,
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instagram
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, tik-tok
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, makes
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person
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's daily life activities so viral that a common
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sees himself or herself in them.
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addition, as
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says
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,
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right inspiration is the key
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success. These popular persons
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the role of dedication in
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's lives. To exemplify, if a
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likes to
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dance, he or she will follow his or her favourite dancer, so that he or she will be able to gain their desired level.
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, following someone is always not a good thing, sometimes it could have
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devastated
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effect on one's
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, if, we fail to choose the right role model.
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,
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end up with suicide or depression, if they fail to do the same.
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, it depends on a
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's role model and on his mentality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • celebrity
  • ordinary backgrounds
  • interest
  • curiosity
  • fascination
  • escapism
  • entertainment
  • inspiration
  • motivation
  • identification
  • relatability
  • social comparison
  • envy
  • public interest
  • negative effects
  • excessive focus
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