Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you because the journal that I love to read is produced by you as editor. I want to say that I noticed one principal mistake in the article.
Actually, I am a big fan of a section about urbanization and recently I have read a short article about my homeland city Berwyn. There is I spent my childhood and when I graduated from high school I went to Chicago. Now I visit my parents some time and
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city.
I had almost finished reading it when I found a terrible mistake. It was research about public transport in Berwyn, where you said that it is growing faster than Linking Words
last
year. In fact, it is impossible because the total number of vehicles is the same as Linking Words
last
year. Authorities just changed some of it.
Unfortunately, I am confused by Linking Words
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detail indeed. I would like to receive an official answer from the journal about its situation. Please provide me with more details Linking Words
how
it happened and which data was used as the base of the study.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Istomina EvgeniiaChange preposition
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea and is logically structured.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate, and the tone is suitable for a formal letter. Maintain this level of formality throughout the letter.
Task Achievement
Address all the points requested in the task prompt and ensure that the response is complete.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite