The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 200 and projection for 2050
The pie graphs represent the proportion of Yemen and Italy's society in three different
ages
over a 50-year period between 2000 and 2050.
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Overall
, there is a significant increase in the percentages of Linking Words
ages
of the Yemen community, except for the Use synonyms
age
of 0-14 Use synonyms
years
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while
the Linking Words
ages
of 15-59 Use synonyms
years
will be projected to be the highest number of people. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
population
of Use synonyms
ages
in Italy experienced a gradual decrease, except for the older Use synonyms
ages
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whereas
the Linking Words
ages
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population
of 15-59 Use synonyms
years
is higher than Use synonyms
ages
60+ Use synonyms
years
.
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According to
the chart. Yemen's Linking Words
population
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of
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aged
age
0-14 Use synonyms
years
was the highest portion in 2000 with just above half, Use synonyms
while
in the next five decades, it will be predicted to experience a downward trend at 37%. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the group Linking Words
age
of 15-59 Use synonyms
years
(46.3%) was less than Use synonyms
ages
of 0-14 Use synonyms
years
in 2000, but the projection in the future will account for the largest Use synonyms
population
at around 57%. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the number of populations for 60+ Linking Words
years
maintains almost the same figure (3.6% and 5,7% respectively), and there is a slight discrepancy between them around 2%.
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On the other hand
, the majority of the Linking Words
population
in Italy for all periods was attributed to the Use synonyms
ages
of 15-59 Use synonyms
years
despite experiencing a decreasing trend. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the quantity of 60+ Linking Words
years
was smaller than the prediction, or it was double less. Eventually, there is a similar portion for Use synonyms
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age
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the age
population
of 0-14 Use synonyms
years
(14,3% and 11,5% respectively), and the gap between data and prediction is about 2%.Use synonyms
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