You are planning a week-long vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbor and tell them that you are going away. In your letter, you should: - ask them to take care of your house; - explain why you will be away.

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Dear Ms. Nicole, I am writing to you because I need some help from you as my neighbour. Your flat is on the same floor as mine and we have kept a perfect relationship. Let me ask you a small favour with my apartment. I will be away from 12 Mart to 19 Mart, and I will not be able to leave my home unattended. Actually, I have plants that require care. It will be necessary to water them twice during my absence. How do you think, could you take care of my plants? So, as you know I have a summer holiday every year.

This

summer was not an exception, and I would like to go to Bali. I should still find an exciting option for a hotel. Unfortunately, I can not cancel my trip or replan the vacation. I hope you can help me. Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Istomina Evgeniia

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

160 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are planning a week-long vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbor and tell them that you are going away. In your letter, you should: - ask them to take care of your house; - explain why you will be away.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

The education of young people is the main priority in countries around the world. Some people believe that educating adults who cannot read or write is essential for the society and more funding should be made available for it. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?