The range of technology availabe to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others think it has opposite effect. Dicuss both views and give your opinions.
Nowadays, the wide variety of technological advancements
are
increasing and Correct subject-verb agreement
is
bring
many benefits to human Wrong verb form
bringing
life
. While
technology
can narrow the gap between social classes, i
would argue that improved Change the capitalization
I
equipments
have created a distance in social relationship.
On the one hand, Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
technology
has improved many opportunities for poor people
in income activities. Unemployed people
can find available jobs that don't require qualifications or experience. For instance
, they can easily find housemaids on applications which helps housewives to
earn a stable salary. Verb problem
apply
Moreover
, many volunteer associations are established by people
with well-off lives to help some diffilcult
situations through seeing on Correct your spelling
difficult
internet
. Add an article
the internet
For example
, a huge of people
use modern phone
Fix the agreement mistake
phones
that
they often share or see the hard Correct pronoun usage
apply
life
of people
with poor conditions that their lives are better after.
On the other hand
, the cost of technology
is quite higher
which is not suitable for all the Correct word choice
high
people
in society, such
as Artificial Intelligence (AI). Both technologies are facilitating rich people
to lead a more productive life
. Futhermore
, it not only improves Correct your spelling
Furthermore
lifestyle
of favouring Add an article
the lifestyle
rich
but Correct article usage
the rich
also
creates barriers for the poor people
in availing some fundamental rights as
health and wellness services because these Correct quantifier usage
such as
thing
Change the determiner
things
are
expensive. Change the verb form
is
For example
, private hospitals are normally equipped with the most advanced technologies which costs a lot to treat cancer and some cases had
Wrong verb form
have
dead
because of Replace the word
died
lacking
of money.
In conclusion, I admit that Wrong verb form
a lack
technology
plays a crucial part in our life
, but it was made for human purposes because today's society often pursues material Fix the agreement mistake
lives
life
, technology
creating a gap between rich and poor is inevitable.Correct word choice
and technology
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