You left a jacket behind at a restaurant you went to recently. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In the letter •describe the jacket •explain when you visited the restaurant and where you were sitting •say want you want the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regard to my black and brown colour jacket which I bought from your McDonald's restaurant.
First of all, I have been your regular customer since 2020 years. I visit your McDonald's restaurant every month. I forgot my black and brown jacket from the NIKE brand. It has two pockets and there is a NIKE mark on the back.
Moving on, on that day I visited with my family and we celebrated my mom's birthday there. We sat at the seventh table in row number. We ordered a cola, burger and birthday cake. It was nighttime and we left after an hour.
Let me know if you find my jacket. My email id is [email protected]. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Javxarbek.
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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