the chart below shoes information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The bar chart provided information on
changes
in average house charges in New York (USA), Frankfurt (Germany), Madrid (Spain), London (UK), and Tokyo
(Japan
) from 1990 to 2002 compared with the average house cost in 1989.
Overall
, between 1990 and 1995 only two cities made slight changes
, and the three other countries declined. However
, the proportion of house charges from 1999 to 2002 surged for four countries, while
Tokyo
(Japan
) diminished.
Frankfurt (Germany) has escalated changes
compared the ratio from 1989 prices and made it to the highest country in midpoint from 1990 to 1995 by approximately 3%, whereas
the lowest ratio changes
stated to both countries which London (UK) and Tokyo
(Japan
) with well under zero percent
.
From 1996 to 2002, Change the spelling
per cent
Tokyo
(Change noun form
Tokyo's
Japan
)’s ratio has
dramatically climbed to just beyond 10%, Unnecessary verb
apply
while
Tokyo
is still under 0% but has moderately leveled
up.Change the spelling
levelled
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