The pie chart shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these cause affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these cause affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The chart illustrates the main cause why agricultural
land
becomes less productive and the table compares how these causes affected North America, Europe, and Oceania ( a large group of islands in the South Pacific including Australia and New Zealand) throughout the 1990s, measured by
percent
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.
Overall
, the causes of
land
degradation worldwide are divided by over-cultivation, over-grazing, deforestation, and others.
As well as
the cause of region
land
humiliation that have four factors. Commence with Europe has the highest percentage which stands out just beneath 10% in deforestation, 7.7% in over-cultivation, and in total 23% of all
land
degraded. Despite all the top numbers, Oceania increased by 11.3% in over-grazing and made it the highest;
however
, it has zero
percent
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in over-cultivation. As regard to North America that possess little in total
land
degrated of 5%. In the end, worldwide, over-grazed has reached 35% which has become the highest part of abasement.
By contrast
, the pie chart didn’t give any details about another element, which has 7%.
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