The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The charts represent the changes once a year
by
a particular British school between 1981 and 200, measured in Change preposition
in
percent
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Change the spelling
per cent
Overall
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while
the three shares of experience escalated, the two others accomplished a decline. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the academic staff salaries came up with the largest proportion of disbursement throughout the observation Linking Words
whereas
insurance had the smallest ratio.
Wages paid to the teaching staff were adjudged the most significant proportion of spending in 1981 (40%) and went up by a quarter before plunging moderately in two decades. Linking Words
On the other hand
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non academics
employee's salaries accounted for less than a third of all expenses in 1981, but their percentage plummeted significantly after 20 years (15%).
The ratio of education resources was as high as furniture and equipment (15%), but a decade later the former adept a marked rise after which it halved, reaching just below 10%, Add a hyphen
non-academics
while
the latter dipped by 2/3 before rising fivefold. Linking Words
Finally
, Linking Words
the
insurance had to rise marginally from 2% to 3% before jumping almost threefold in 2001.Correct article usage
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