The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
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The charts represent the changes once a year
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a particular British school between 1981 and 200, measured in
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per cent
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.
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while
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the three shares of experience escalated, the two others accomplished a decline.
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, the academic staff salaries came up with the largest proportion of disbursement throughout the observation
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insurance had the smallest ratio. Wages paid to the teaching staff were adjudged the most significant proportion of spending in 1981 (40%) and went up by a quarter before plunging moderately in two decades.
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employee's salaries accounted for less than a third of all expenses in 1981, but their percentage plummeted significantly after 20 years (15%). The ratio of education resources was as high as furniture and equipment (15%), but a decade later the former adept a marked rise after which it halved, reaching just below 10%,
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the latter dipped by 2/3 before rising fivefold.
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insurance had to rise marginally from 2% to 3% before jumping almost threefold in 2001.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
  • operational costs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
  • cost analysis
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