The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.
The graph and chart illustrate dates on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average figure of
days
with rain each month for Brisbane
and Canberra
in Australia.
It is clear that
the highest and lowest temperatures in Brisbane
are higher than in Canberra
. Also
, from June to October, rainfall of both Cities have opposite trends.
In Brisbane
, the biggest average temperature takes place in February at 30℃. Followed by 27℃ from December to February in Canberra
. The lowest average temperature of Brisbane
at 10℃ in July and August, 10 times as much as that of Canberra
in June and July.
Looking at the average number of times with rainfall in two Australian cities. The average number of rainy days
is highest from December to April. With the largest number of 14 rainy days
in a month. In Canberra
, the amount of moisture is hugest in June,July,August and October, at 10 days
with rainfall every month.Submitted by anhnguhongmai on
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