It is become increasingly expensive for museums to open to the public. What would be your solution to keep them open?

In today's busy life, the cost of opening entertainment facilities has become dramatically increased.

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, opening a new

museum

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to the public is economically challenging

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these days. The building costs and decreased interest

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galleries

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among

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society directly affect

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the opening of future museums.

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,

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essay will try to

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solutions to tackle

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economical

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obstacles in terms of

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a new

museum

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.

Firstly

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, the

construction

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price of a building has become extremely expensive since the pandemic. Because

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lack of enough materials and workforce for

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, it is nearly

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impossible

to reduce the

prices

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.

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, one of the ongoing

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of

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art

galleries

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in Istanbul has to stop because of the sudden increase in brick and steel

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during the pandemic.

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, opening a new entertainment facility requires a lot of

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to attract customers. If

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kind of business is not supported with enough advertisement, eventually, all the investment might become worthless.

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, people hesitate to open a new

museum

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to society which requires tons of money and promotion.

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, there might be some solutions to remove these obstacles. Since the building

prices

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have become

indeniably

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undeniably

unaffordable for entertaining activities,

galleries

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and cultural associations should try the concept of

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exhibition.

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the help of the government, they can rent appropriate

vacants

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vacancies

to perform an exhibition.

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, they could improve their attractiveness by using social

media

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channels. Social

media

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platforms can not only increase the popularity of local museums and

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, but they can

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assist

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their budgets through public donations. The Pera

Museum

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is an excellent example

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situation which improved its revenue by donations from the social

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channels.

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, it has become an independent

museum

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which serves for free and only accepts donations. In conclusion, entertainment facilities are confronted with amazingly inclined

prices

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to open to the public.

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construction

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and advertisement expenses are the biggest outcome of

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issue, people and authorities can try to use social

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and outdoor exhibition

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to alleviate their total expenditure on opening a

musem

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museum

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