The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
The pie charts compare the most important factors people came and left the
UK
in 2007.
Overall
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The proportion of immigrants to the UK
for a definite job was almost equal to migration from it at 30% and 29 % respectively. As we can see the figure for joining was close too, 15% for coming, and 14% for leaving people.
The number who left the UK
because of looking for work was far from people entering. In detail, the number for the former was at around 22% and 12 % for the latter. And further
reason which was in the second place of immigrants into this
country was formal
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