Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport construction. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

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and mitigation of
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that occurs by adopting from various
countries
that have done things to prevent
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of raising dikes around the land, reclamation
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and limiting from sucking groundwater.
In addition
, what I will do is plant mangroves to resist abrasion on the seafront, build embankments to prevent flood water from rising inland, and provide education to the community about adaptation
due to
SLR
. My current efforts are to provide knowledge and campaign about the dangers of
SLR
for coastal areas.
In addition
, in 2021, I
also
conducted a survey to see how severe the damage caused by
SLR
is on the north coast of Pekalongan. The 197
countries
that have joined the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change (
UNFCCC
) have agreed that reducing carbon emissions is one of the main steps in reducing global warming. Sea level rise can
also
be prevented by reducing global warming. All
countries
are working together to deal with rising sea levels that can endanger
countries
and their people. Rising seas can cause a country's economy to collapse and it will take a lot of time to recover from
this
situation.
UNFCCC
is an organization resulting from the climate change agreement in Rio De Janeiro, Brazil on June 3-14, 1992 and was enacted starting from 1994. The formation of the
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initially
initiated by 154
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are called the Conference of Parties (
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has held COP28 times with COP28 being held in Dubai, United Arab Emirates. In September, before the implementation of COP28, it will begin with representatives from the United Nations (UN) who convey the progress of slowing climate change called the "global stocktake".
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air traffic
  • noise pollution
  • air pollution
  • airport construction
  • environmental damage
  • natural habitats
  • taxing
  • discourage
  • unnecessary travel
  • impact on the environment
  • government taxation
  • promote sustainable alternatives
  • public transportation infrastructure
  • reduce the demand
  • funding initiatives
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