The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008.
The bar graph illustrates people’s reports, who live in major UK
cities
, about issues that they are facing with include
Education and Training, Health Services and air pollution in 2008.
Change preposition
including
Overall
, problems about
health services Change preposition
with
become
a major issue in 5 different Wrong verb form
became
cities
, while
, Education and training issues followed after that.
Regarding Health Services, more than 50% percent
of people reported it as an issue throughout all the Change the spelling
per cent
cities
. In Belfast, nearly 60% of residents experienced issue
in that field and it is the biggest number when Fix the agreement mistake
issues
compare
with other Change the form of the verb
compared
cities
. Newcastle, Birmingham and Cardiff following
that with Wrong verb form
followed
average
Correct article usage
an average
50
%.
Change preposition
of 50
On the other hand
, in London and Glasgow
people have Add a comma
Glasgow,
concern
about Educational and training problems more than others with nearly 52% and 53% respectively. Add an article
a concern
However
, air pollution only take
Change the verb form
takes
little
portion Correct word choice
a small
as
Change preposition
of
a
problem in these two Correct article usage
the
cities
by
less than 15%. Less than 5% of people Change preposition
apply
worried
about Air pollution in New Castle.Add a missing verb
are worried
Submitted by airbender on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!