The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the favourite accommodation methods of the British
while
they were on vacation in 2010, in four particular countries such
as England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland
. The units are measured in per cent.
Overall
, Hotels were the most popular among them and caravans and camping were least selected.
Firstly
, Hotels were opted for more than 50 in England and Scotland moreover
Wales and Northern Ireland
accounted for above 45. Although
Caravan was the second highest in Northern Ireland
, others accounted for below 15 . Even though self-catering was the second highest between 25 to 40, Northern Ireland
was made least customers by it. Camping was not popular in both countries and it Accounted for below 15 in all Countries.Submitted by shahinka.687 on
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