The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000

The line graph illustrates the proportions of part-time employed

university

students categorised by the five distinct British academic institutions from 1998 to 2008.

Overall

,

while

the percentage of

this

type of student climbed in terms of three from five universities,

the

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Langsdale

University

experiences

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a downward trend. Without a doubt, working part-time during the studies became more popular during the analyzed time period. Three out of five universities, to illustrate the point, could increase the share of

this

category.

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Middleridge

University

and

the

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Highcastle

University

increased their percentage steadily to 75% and 65 %, respectively,

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Finckleborough

University

interestingly experienced a steep growth from 18 % in 2005 to over 65 % in 2008.

However

,

the

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Langsdale

University

could not follow the upward trend and ,

therefore

, decreased its proportion of part-time working students.

While

,in 1998.the percentage was outstandingly high

with

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60 %

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compared to the other universities, despite some fluctuation from 1998 to 2002, a steady fall started at 50 % and reached 30 % in 2008