24.The chart below shows percentages of people choosing different ways to reduce greenhouse gases in four different countries in 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

24.The chart below shows percentages of people choosing different ways to reduce greenhouse gases in four different countries in 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph displays the proportion of ways individuals used to decrease greenhouse gases in Portugal,
Poland
,
Estonia
and
Holland
in 2005.
Overall
, the way that Portugal citizens use the most is by government regulations,
while
Poland
’s is a lifestyle, and the other two nations mainly employ advanced technologies. In Portugal, 40% of people utilize government regulations to reduce the number of greenhouse gases,
while
in
Poland
only approximately 27%, which is nearly 10% more than
Estonia
,
finally
,
Holland
had just under 15%.
On the other hand
, lifestyle has 30% in Portugal and
Poland
and 10% in
Estonia
and
Holland
. 30% of people applied advanced technology in Portugal,
Holland
’s value was three as much as the lowest, namely
Poland
, which only had a portion of 10%,
while
Estonia
doubled
Poland
.
Finally
, In
Poland
and
Estonia
around 26% and 15% respectively, employed other ways to reduce the gases that are not named, Portugal and
Holland
had one-fifth of people using other methods.
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