24.The chart below shows percentages of people choosing different ways to reduce greenhouse gases in four different countries in 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

24.The chart below shows percentages of people choosing different ways to reduce greenhouse gases in four different countries in 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graph displays the proportion of ways individuals used to decrease greenhouse gases in Portugal,
Poland
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,
Estonia
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and
Holland
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in 2005.
Overall
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, the way that Portugal citizens use the most is by government regulations,
while
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Poland
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’s is a lifestyle, and the other two nations mainly employ advanced technologies. In Portugal, 40% of people utilize government regulations to reduce the number of greenhouse gases,
while
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in
Poland
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only approximately 27%, which is nearly 10% more than
Estonia
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,
finally
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,
Holland
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had just under 15%.
On the other hand
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, lifestyle has 30% in Portugal and
Poland
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and 10% in
Estonia
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and
Holland
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. 30% of people applied advanced technology in Portugal,
Holland
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’s value was three as much as the lowest, namely
Poland
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, which only had a portion of 10%,
while
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Estonia
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doubled
Poland
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.
Finally
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, In
Poland
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and
Estonia
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around 26% and 15% respectively, employed other ways to reduce the gases that are not named, Portugal and
Holland
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had one-fifth of people using other methods.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words poland, estonia, holland with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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