In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

Owning a
home
is more important than renting a
house
, In other countries, In my opinion,
this
is a positive situation that I will explain my own opinion. Nowadays, Bangkok in Thailand has most of condominiums than houses. Especially, the
house
was bought by wealthy people which is the reason why we have to
rent
a
home
or condominium by the way It is a high price to
rent
it including having to pay month by month must be more expensive than buying one time. Buying a
home
is much more comfortable than renting one because if you buy a
house
, you can do anything that you want
for example
you can
rent
a
house
for
rent
to gain money for do else’s business,
On the other hand
, if you renting a
house
you can’t do anything with your
house
and have to pay much of money including an interest payment if you pay late. It can be concluded the passage below is
positive
Add an article
a positive
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situation , that owning a
home
is much more comfortable including paying less than renting a place that
also
important for those who want to research information for owning or renting a place.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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