In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

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Owning a
home
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is more important than renting a
house
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, In other countries, In my opinion,
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is a positive situation that I will explain my own opinion. Nowadays, Bangkok in Thailand has most of condominiums than houses. Especially, the
house
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was bought by wealthy people which is the reason why we have to
rent
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a
home
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or condominium by the way It is a high price to
rent
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it including having to pay month by month must be more expensive than buying one time. Buying a
home
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is much more comfortable than renting one because if you buy a
house
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, you can do anything that you want
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you can
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a
house
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for
rent
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to gain money for do else’s business,
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, if you renting a
house
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you can’t do anything with your
house
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and have to pay much of money including an interest payment if you pay late. It can be concluded the passage below is
positive
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situation , that owning a
home
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is much more comfortable including paying less than renting a place that
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important for those who want to research information for owning or renting a place.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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