The line graph illustrates three different kinds of crimes that occurred in Newport City center between 2003 and 2012.
The line graph compares three distinct types of crimes that happened in Newport City centre from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
, burglary
had a decreasing tendency during the time, whereas
car theft and robbery stayed almost unchanged during the years. Additionally
, burglary
was the most popular crime at the start of the period.
To begin
, in 2003, just under 3500 incidents of burglary
was
recorded, rising to approximately 3700 cases in 2004. Correct subject-verb agreement
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However
, this
number dramatically dropped to about 1200 (in 2008) and fluctuated to 1500 and back to around 1400 in 2012. Initially
, in 2003, the figure for car theft was about 2700, slightly declined to just above 2000 in 2006, reaching the figure of 2600 in 2010.
Furthermore
, robbery started with around 700 cases in 2003 and ended with almost the same number in 2012, representing the least committed kind of crime among the others. Even though,
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burglary
had the highest amount of cases at the start of the period, car theft had overtaken that by 2012.Submitted by innakireeva0101 on
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