The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams give information about the causative factors of agricultural downward productivity all over the world and the
three
affected regions with details in the 1990s. Overall
, the trend classifies the four main reasons for the land
degradation into: overgrazing, deforestation
, overcultivation and others, where the overgrazing as the main cause. The data present in percentage and detailed description of the three
additional regions were given: North America
, Europe
and Oceania.
At first,
the pie chart in 1999s witnessed overgrazing for all world agriculture as the most major effect for land
became less productive by 35%. It is followed by deforestation
by 30% while
over-cultivation by 28% and the other factors resulted in only one fifth of the highest proportion.
On the other hand
, the data from the table specifically segregated focusing on the three
major reasons described previously within three
given regions. Europe
was significantly affected by 23% and followed by Oceania with 13% from the total land
while
North America
showed the least affected by 5%.
In contrast
with the data for the overworld as similar as in Oceania’s land
degradation whereas
the overgrazing activities became the main culprit, both North America
and Europe
showed different results. In Europe
, deforestation
had greatly affected almost half of the land
productivity by 9.8% while
over-cultivation in North America
caused more than half of the affected land
by 3.3%. In contrast
, no over cultivation but overgrazing by 11.3% over 13% in Oceania mainly caused the land
degrade with the activity of deforestation
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