The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams give information about the causative factors of agricultural downward productivity all over the world and the
three
affected regions with details in the 1990s. Use synonyms
Overall
, the trend classifies the four main reasons for the Linking Words
land
degradation into: overgrazing, Use synonyms
deforestation
, overcultivation and others, where the overgrazing as the main cause. The data present in percentage and detailed description of the Use synonyms
three
additional regions were given: North Use synonyms
America
, Use synonyms
Europe
and Oceania.
At Use synonyms
first,
the pie chart in 1999s witnessed overgrazing for all world agriculture as the most major effect for Linking Words
land
became less productive by 35%. It is followed by Use synonyms
deforestation
by 30% Use synonyms
while
over-cultivation by 28% and the other factors resulted in only one fifth of the highest proportion.
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On the other hand
, the data from the table specifically segregated focusing on the Linking Words
three
major reasons described previously within Use synonyms
three
given regions. Use synonyms
Europe
was significantly affected by 23% and followed by Oceania with 13% from the total Use synonyms
land
Use synonyms
while
North Linking Words
America
showed the least affected by 5%.
Use synonyms
In contrast
with the data for the overworld as similar as in Oceania’s Linking Words
land
degradation Use synonyms
whereas
the overgrazing activities became the main culprit, both North Linking Words
America
and Use synonyms
Europe
showed different results. In Use synonyms
Europe
, Use synonyms
deforestation
had greatly affected almost half of the Use synonyms
land
productivity by 9.8% Use synonyms
while
over-cultivation in North Linking Words
America
caused more than half of the affected Use synonyms
land
by 3.3%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, no over cultivation but overgrazing by 11.3% over 13% in Oceania mainly caused the Linking Words
land
degrade with the activity of Use synonyms
deforestation
by 1.7%Use synonyms
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