Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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Some people argue that all experimentation on
animals
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is bad and should be outlawed,
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, others feel that crucial scientific discoveries can be made from animal
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. There is no denying
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that annually many
animals
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die or suffer from
experiments
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but without
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we would be unable to
use
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many products that we
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today, or we
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would
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not have
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the
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knowledge that we have today
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scientific discoveries.
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, we daily
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items which were tested by
animals
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and we know for sure that it is safe
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we can
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it
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without fearing for
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our health
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,
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for scientific discoveries people
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animals
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and if everything goes right
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they do those
experiments
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on human beings and if we do not do those experiment on
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many individuals would die or suffer and
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the reason why I strongly believe that there are not any alternatives From my point of view experimentation on
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can be justified, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, even though
experiments
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can have some dreadful consequences on
animals
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, there are cases where it can be justified,
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, animal testing is sometimes seen as necessary for ensuring the safety of products and medical procedures before they are used on humans. It can help identify potential risks and prevent harm to individuals. In conclusion, there are no alternatives to stop
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from being experimented on,
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the advantages of testing
animals
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outweigh the disadvantages and
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on
animals
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can be justified
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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