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Many people use written language in a less formal and more relaxed way. Why? Does this development have advantages and disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

#people #language #development
There are
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 large number of people who
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 that nowadays individuals prefer to
use
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 language
that is
 less formal and is in
more
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 relaxed form for their written
message
.
However
, there are several
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individuals
 that are not in favour of
such
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According to
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 statement, which is
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explained
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relevant examples. To commence with,
this
 is a positive
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development
according to
 me because
in
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 recent days and ages, it has been seen that
life
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 of
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men
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 or
women
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have
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became
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 more hectic,
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than
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 it
was
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used to be in previous ages.
Therefore
, human
prefer
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prefers
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 to write
the
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 short
message
 with is not formal and do not take much
time
 for writing by the sender and
reading
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 by the
reciever
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receiver
.
For instance
:
currently
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currently,
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 even
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colleagues
 prefer to talk and write a text
that is
 not too fancy and is in
more
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 relaxed form.
This
help
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 the
reciever
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receiver
 to understand the
message
easiy
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easily
.
Additionally
, in
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 ages and days, mankind
want
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 to be as
convinent
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convenient
 as possible. What it means to state
that is
, human beings prefer to
use
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message
 skills.
Such
 as "
how
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r u
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are you
, idk...." which are the short form of how are you and
i
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 do not know.
This
 method is
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quite convenient
 especially for
yougsters
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youngsters
 and working citizens, since is less
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. To
conlude
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conclude
, informal
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language
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 in for
use
 from
last
 few years,
becuause
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because
 of its benefits. One of
major
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benefot
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benefit
benefits
 is
time
consuming
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, since less
time
 is required, so, they can
use
 their
time
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somewhere
 which is more
prooductive
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productive
 and
this
 is the reason why
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it
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positive
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a positive
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 effect on society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • informality
  • digital communication
  • texting
  • social media
  • instant messaging
  • generational shifts
  • brevity
  • personal expression
  • language standards
  • erosion
  • interlocutors
  • emojis
  • internet slang
  • academic contexts
  • language learning
  • misunderstandings
  • language teaching
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